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Old 06-27-2013, 10:07 AM   #391
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Originally Posted by cosmo20002 View Post
Just some friendly advice:

The entire second paragraph is questionable, but the part in bold--completely unecessary. No ones cares about what you guys weighed, and unless his junk fell out of his leotard thing and you started fondling him, no one cares about the the details of your wrestling practice and it isn't relevant whatsoever.

The third paragraph could also be cut down.
Why could you possibly want to read about some dudes junk falling out of his leotard while wrestling another dude.

I'm with cut the whole paragraph completely and keep it in the straight section of literotica.
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